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Insipid sighs of a supposedly untarnished world
Fleeting by my jaded thoughts.


The hopeless expectation of a better life
Tearing my every dream apart.


Take it all away, my love.
Make the sunset dawn in my heart
Make it all withdraw, my love
Speak to the demons in my head

Haunt my every secret dream
Wake my every shattered hope
Fight my every fragile fear
Fix my every broken oath

Shake my world from its beliefs
Steal my every brittle breath
Break my every daunting doubt
Raise the sun for me once more


In a blue eye rests my love
Scatter it all over you
Share it with the earth above
As I fell under the world we knew
©2008-2009 ~heartless0romantic
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and i keep thinking.. have i actually wasted two whole years of my life?
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"Raise the sun for me once more..." wow, that's so wonderful! :+fav:

You didn't waste time, you got expierienced, eh! :hug: Please don't be sad, hun. A wonderful person like you will be happy again soon. *hugs you and pets your back*

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D'you like a good mixture of photography and drawing? Have a look at my gallery: [link] :hug:
I'm always glad about some feedback! =)
*smiles* yeah.. it'll be okay i guess. what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, eh? *laughs bitterly*
*hugs you tight* thanks, hun.

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"Don't forget me..."
"I won't remember anything else."
stii tu ... *holds you tight* poti doar sa simti ce cred eu despre ce ai scris.

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Christine: You will end up childless and alone.
Will: Well, fingers crossed, yeah.

there's that thing called freedom that keeps us tied up in the dark...
si ce crezi tu? *snuggles*

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"Don't forget me..."
"I won't remember anything else."
yeah, that's how it should be. smile and go on. :P
*hugs you and kisses your eyelids*

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D'you like a good mixture of photography and drawing? Have a look at my gallery: [link] :hug:
I'm always glad about some feedback! =)
Oh, I really liked "Make the sunset dawn in my heart". You have the ability to move me every time with your words. I do not think that you wasted two years of your life, you got immense joy out of those two years didn't you? Would you do it again even if it meant getting hurt once more? If you would then I do not think that you have anything to regret. Please don't be sad...we all need to smile *smiles and hugs you*

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Rage more!
frumos... foarte :)

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..:True love doesn't have a happy ending because true love never ends:..
-Imitation is suicide-
this is really good.
its inspiring.
but i dont believe the two years were wasted...
you were happy once during it right?
learning experiences :]
hope you feel better.
Wow.
I really am inspired by every one of your writings.
And as the others have said, you haven't waisted two years, i'm sure there were many times you had a smile, and you can't regret something that once made you smile.
So smile, keep looking up, don't give up, and that will help keep your sun raised. ;)
*smiles* thanks, hun. i guess every experience, good or bad, helps you grow as a person. i'm glad i have people around me who really do care. *hugs*

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"Don't forget me..."
"I won't remember anything else."

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